No technical information, a person's knowledge about the car before and after the road test is the same. So whats the use of the road test, your just showing your vocabulary skills, and nothing what you have understood about the car.
2nd: If I'm a first time reader, I won't come to know from the road test that the car is 4WD. No mention of it even once. (and in Audi it was repeated n number of times)
3rd: "The power delivery is smooth and linear" Can you explain this? I have failed to understand it. I'm still a learner and will be one for my entire life.
Charles, if all these tests are written by you, then I have made a picture of you. Your a person who has good command on his words, knows the specifications or a car, but lacks that touch of knowing the car with its very minute detail.
So far this is my view, and all I can say is CW should have someone who can understand very minute detail of the car.
I'm not promoting anyone, but look at Car India, all professionals. Aspi (a racer) knows his cars well. Amit (assistant editor) an engineer, who knows how things work. A great team of content writers
If you think I'm promoting Car India, let us consider Overdrive , Sirish himself is a Mechanical Engineer
Autocar India, now their road testers are either racers or people who know their cars.
I have known many of this personally and thats why I'm commenting.though I don't really know much about the CarWale's editorial team
I will be happy to know you as well. But I'm no longer a part of the the content stuff anywhere.
And my work is completely different
@Pankaj as you had mentioned about correcting the errors, I can't find any changes.